Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
In modern times, the issue of smoking in public places has become highly controversial. There are those who say that smoking in public areas should be banned. However, others believe that it should not. In this essay I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that governments and municipalities should forbid smoking in public places, such as hospitals, restaurants and train stations. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of this idea is because cigarette smoke is carcinogenic for the people who breathe it. A good illustration of this is that people who smoke a lot and secondary smokers can develop serious illness such as lung cancer. A further point in favour of banning smoking in public places is that the smoke from cigarettes smells terrible. If you stand next to someone who is smoking, your clothes and hair will smell like tobacco smoke for his rest of the day.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that smoking in public places should be allowed. The main reason why people think that this is a good idea is because it could negatively affect some businesses, such as bars, restaurants and nightclubs. As a result, many people could lose their jobs. Secondly, the government could lose a lot of tax money from cigarettes. This is because less people would buy cigarettes, and so pay less tax on them.
In conclusion, this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. Despite arguments to the contrary, I feel very strongly that we should ban smoking in all public places. If the government implements this policy, we will have a healthier and cleaner society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... money from cigarettes. This is because less people would buy cigarettes, and so pay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90784982935 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59303921015 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532423208191 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3135039611 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5882352941 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287144012838 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969816799997 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964060712207 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17733123887 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083851679088 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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