Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Consumption of internet, especially, need of social media has increased exponentially for last few years. I intend that social media has brought benefits in our lives rather than disadvantages, if we use it properly.
There are over 1 billion Facebook accounts which used regular. From kindergarten kids to pension elders use it too. Social media is used for communication and entertainment. It allows us to contact anyone who is on the other side of the earth without any charge. Moreover, it gives us opportunity to get latest information and keep up with the world trend. Also, if you have desire to share anything unique you can do with others, it the best way to introduce yourself.
However, social media has dark side too. The most crucial thing is personal information confidentiality. When using social media, you must know what you are doing. Clicking on one button, you are in risk to share your very private information. Usually, elders or kids, who is not familiar to modern technology has to be careful. Leaving their account open in public internet centers, possibility to occur fraud might increase. In Mongolia, there is warning inducted from Police that says people to not leave open their account in any place and tell anyone their password or not to access risky links which derived from unknown source.
Despite the fact that too many risks it is followed with, people still use social media. It became essential part of their life. I believe that, as long as people follows security steps and be aware of losing confidentiality of their accounts, it is safe to use it and keep on receiving advantages of social media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the latest'.
Suggestion: get the latest
...e. Moreover, it gives us opportunity to get latest information and keep up with the world ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95306859206 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73943239154 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5997862154 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2222222222 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299616997295 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967142655566 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101446298904 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189615347539 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363552933197 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.