Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
I am convinced that social media like Facebook and Twitter plays an essential role in our daily life. Obviously, the popularity of social media goes up with time amongst all age sectors. Nevertheless, there is an important concern about the potential risks of sharing personal information on such websites. In my opinion, the possible advantages of social media outweigh its disadvantages.
Since the advent and spread of social media, some argue that it is easier to spy on and illegally collect private data. Thereafter, this data can be used to harm or threaten many persons. For example, some hackers may steal someone’s account and beg his friends for money. Moreover, many of us are social media addicts and stay chatting for many hours with our friends.
Nevertheless, the benefits of social media are numerous and extremely beneficial. We can communicate with friends and family members at any time and at a low-cost. A good example of this is when we travel abroad and want to keep in touch with our relatives. So, it is easy to call them and send them some pictures of important moments. Certain websites like Facebook offer the option of selling or buying products, like furniture, without the need for a third-party. Notably, expressing your ideas and perspectives is not under any kind of surveillance or interference anymore. Therefore, the role of newspapers and even T.V programs has diminished in the last few years.
In conclusion, I greatly agree that the benefits of social media overcome its potential side effects. However, we should be cautious when sharing our data or multimedia, like pictures or videos. In addition, everyone should avoid the overuse of certain websites.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s and family members at any time and at a low-cost. A good example of this is when we trav...
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...s, like furniture, without the need for a third-party. Notably, expressing your ideas and per...
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Suggestion: V
...fore, the role of newspapers and even T.V programs has diminished in the last few...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13620071685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85339328957 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.0919806479 49.4020404114 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6111111111 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293001114345 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889231440008 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104909726177 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18237608574 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123301839441 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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