Social media replaced communication way and people forgot traditional methods and follow social media news and events.
Do advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Knowing the fact that,today technology increases in the world,which have good impact on society.However, nowadays, communication is easy with social media,moreover, gruop of society use internet for communication with each other and they forgot their traditional method and follow news and events.In my opinion, this viewpoint holds a valid ground.this essay shall further articulate merits outweigh demerits and thus shall reach to a logical conclusion.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost cons is time saving method.To make it more clear, owing to digital media, people can easily talk to each other without any contact. Subsequently, they can call and messages any time with any place. Another advantage ,which cannot be avoided is people can talk with their relatives without meet them. In simple terms, today's people can contact their relatives via online. Consequently, people can easily communicate with each other. To cite an example, foreign people also talk with their family via videocall and it is easy way for communication because of social media.
Contrary to this, there are myriad of disadvantages on this phenomenon. To begin with, due to social media and technology, people would avoid their physical contact . In other words, people's feelings and emotions less than past as they are only friends on social media not in real life. As a result , theseday people become individual greedy and selfishness toward others.
To sum up, although there are various downsides on this trend such as less physical contact between masses. Yet , in my opinion, there are some upsides, which should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39230769231 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83115021295 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.754257867 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276083519553 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863219169663 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773003301385 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147499616741 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877870660219 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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