One of the burning issues of today’s world is endangered species, which get to extinct day by day owing to human beings' activities. This situation is understandable, and measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problems.
There are two main reasons why animals are disappearing. One of the main causes of the problem is due to human activities including residential, industrial, and commercial ones. The urban expansion causes woodlands to give place to houses and roads and once logging is excessive, the jungles turn into bare land. As a result, it inflicts tremendous damage on animal’s natural habitats. Another reason is that a lot of animals are being poached due to an increased demand for products made from their body parts. For instance, rhino horns are illegally collected by unhuman hunters and sold at high prices. Although many rules and laws are proposed to protect endangered species, it does not seem to be effective.
Based on the arguments cited above, there are several steps that can be taken to tackle this problem. Firstly, urban expansion should be stopped by regulations to protect and keep intact natural environment. Laws related to environmental protection should be passed, according to which organizations and individuals that do harm to the surroundings will be stringently punished. Secondly, enhance the awareness of the community about the importance of animal protection should also be implemented, and thus, the amount of using products made from animal skin or horns may decrease significantly.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the extinction of rare animal species, but governments can take measures to tackle this problem.
- The maps show southside a shopping mall as it isnow and plans for its development 78
- Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school 61
- The graph shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The two column charts show the percentage of food and other items bought by 3 European countries in 1998 and 2008
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31734317343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95338529752 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5469238206 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119125190701 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432019864177 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438788218988 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763381651819 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443849526679 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.