Some believe that charitable organizations should help people all over the world. while others say it should be limited to the based country only. Discuss and give your own opinion.
One of the most conspicious trend of today's world is a colassal upsurge in the number of people who think that charitable organizations need to provide aid all over the world. While others argue that this activity should be limited to the nation where charity is based.The ensuing paragraphs will enunciates both the given views and my opinion as well.
In respect of serving people in entire universe, the proponents of former view suggests that it must expand in every nook and corner of the world.The reason behind this is, being a human the responsibility of helping each and every person relied on an each individual wheather he is residing in same or distinct country and not to discriminate on the ground of caste, creed , colour and specifically on Place .By increasing the area of welfare of human being through charity , a message of love and care can be conveyed to the whole community.On the top of this,relationships on international level would definitely become strong among various kingdoms.The example can be taken from eurasion states(Germany,Italy,Iraq moreover) where they used to help each other in previous era and now they are having a strong bonding.
Notwithstanding this, some advocate ,it should be restricted to the native people only for the overall development of the weaker section. well, it is undenying fact that regular flow of finance in nation adds equality in society.Therefore, by moving money in form of charity within the same areas of related country will rise up the life standard of people because they will start getting daily life survival goods.In addition to this , the continuity of this trend can make a territory dependable after a point with the passage of time, so this should not be follwed.For instance,northern parts of America facing the same issue because they were in the tendency of helping other ones in unusual way and now their economy is dependable.
In conclusion, both the point of view make sense in one or the other way. I, however, side with the first view the reason is charity should cannot be divided on the part of states,territories and border lines, if it so then it will not be called welfareness, it would become a demonstration of fake believes.In simple words , i strongly agree that charitable trusts must move forward to help people of foreign cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99742930591 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10579367118 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586118251928 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 256.685307213 49.4020404114 520% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.714285714 106.682146367 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.5714285714 20.7667163134 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8571428571 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248031209359 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122173738398 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509984532857 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156188235573 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066160086133 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.9 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.