Some believe that one of the elements consistently involved in our employment decision is a personal perception. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that one of the elements that are related directly to our job decision is a personal perception. I totally agree with this statement. It is obvious that career paths play an important role in our life. There are various factors that have an impact on the career development process and personal perception is a crucial aspect. It has some evidence for this comment.
To begin, one of the most essential influences that may benefit us in our professional decision-making process is self-awareness. Aside from academic knowledge we need to know more about ourselves, such as what we like and what we are good at. Furthermore, properly recognizing our own values and talents will support us in finding a field that we enjoy. We can discover occupations that are the perfect fit for us if we have a solid foundation of self-knowledge. Second, self-knowledge helps us define our objectives. Taking time to reflect on our abilities and strengths so that we can determine what makes us happy and keeps us motivated on a daily basis. By doing so, we will be able to identify which jobs are a perfect match for our personalities. Third, personal awareness helps us answer questions related to the work environment we love. I believe that the working environment is crucial. We should look for a job where we will naturally fit in well. How are we going to do that? I believe we should respond to certain personal inquiries. For example, do you like to work alone or in collaboration with others? or we can answer the quiz questions on certain websites on the Internet to figure out what sort of occupations we truly want to do in the future. True, a good working atmosphere will greatly assist us in our career growth process.
To summarize, there are many more influences that determine our job choices, thus I believe that in addition to the personal factors I stated, we should equip ourselves with as many skills as possible that are beneficial to us, not redundant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
... alone or in collaboration with others? or we can answer the quiz questions on cer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, second, so, third, thus, well, for example, in addition, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80701754386 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9099488069 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53216374269 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8057767456 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2857142857 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194997238024 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664859349144 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524823131316 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142726413643 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621539827726 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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