There are different views about maintaining the traditional culture of a country or region. Some people are of the opinion that it is a waste of time to preserve traditions and customs, whereas others point out that such values are vitally important in this civilized world and therefore need to be preserved by all means. Personally, I would say both arguments have validity, but I am more convinced of the latter due to its significant benefits in terms of spiritual and economic gains.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that people are addicted to the Internet and modern things rather than traditional cultures. Thanks to the development of technology, people easily connect with other sides of the world and are strongly influenced by different cultures. Undoubtedly, nowadays people spend most of their free time playing computer games and listening to the music of foreign artists rather than traditional games and music of their country. Moreover, some people say that traditional cultures are out of date and no longer appropriate in today's modern life. For example, in the past, many ethnicities used to encourage the marriage of a girl and a boy before eighteen due to the limit of education and gender inequality. Today, people's intellectual has been increased, people understand the harm of depraved customs such as child marriage, arranged marriage, and consanguine marriage so those inappropriate cultures have been restricted.
On the other hand, maintaining a country's traditional culture is not only beneficial for spirituality but also for the nation's economy. Traditions and customs act as a bridge connecting people of different generations in a family. For instance, on the last day of the year, all the family members are supposed to gather and have dinner together in order to summarize what has been done in the past year and give the best of luck for the new year. In addition, long-standing culture has a great impact not only on one's cultural identity but also a nation's identity, making one distinctive from the world's cultural diversity as ao dai is the traditional clothes of Vietnam. If someone wears ao dai, others will definitely know they are from Vietnam. In terms of economic gains, if there was no difference among countries around the world, the world would become a much less interesting place. For that reason, no one is interested in understanding the traditional values of other countries leading to no more demands for international travel and as a result, the tourism industry would collapse.
In conclusion, while some traditions and cultures are no longer appropriate in today's life, I personally believe that preserving and maintaining our traditional cultures are important due to their good effect on the spirit and economy that I mentioned above.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...icial for spirituality but also for the nations economy. Traditions and customs act as ...
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Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ly on ones cultural identity but also a nations identity, making one distinctive from t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17105263158 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91551553593 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 755.1 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9407189523 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.705882353 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8235294118 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390372737185 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121635194152 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887170311629 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250417775927 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502964108016 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...icial for spirituality but also for the nations economy. Traditions and customs act as ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ly on ones cultural identity but also a nations identity, making one distinctive from t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17105263158 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91551553593 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 755.1 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9407189523 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.705882353 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8235294118 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390372737185 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121635194152 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887170311629 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250417775927 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502964108016 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.