Some business find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills .What are the causes and suggest some posible solutions
In the industrial world , the question whether interpersonal skill has become one of main elements when firms find their staffs provokes the controversy.Therefore candidates who are lacked skills have been found more and more From my perspective, ther are lots of reasons which is not identified but some suitable solutions have been practiced.
There are several reasons for being short of social skills. Firstly parent's education has influenced on shaping a child's personatity.For example, children who are overprotective become dependence so that someone called “industrial chicken”.Secondly , at school, students are enforced upon gaining high rank, excellent scores while boosting interpersonal skills is said to waste time.Finally, to be honest, not only does subjectivism enable people not to have crucial skills, it also become a burden of psychology seriously.
However, in order to solve this issue and conduct a business, firms take some measures to train new employees. During probationary period, staffs are cooperated as start-up to exploit abilities and divide into groups easily manages and trains.In addition, the company can organise programs as climbing or camping because workin together, their survival skills are put to the test.Last but not least, constructing training centre should be encouraged because of various benefits it brings to economic country and business.
To recapitulate briefly, although encountering lacking social skills, some solutions suggested are applied to develop interpersonal skills of new staffs.It seems that its measures are highly effective for various companies which faced this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84647302905 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21111087379 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709543568465 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.686338722 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.833333333 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.1666666667 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 7.06120827912 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214429869383 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965768552262 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811409774354 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129091126931 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075460716268 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.0946893788 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.54 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.26 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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