There have been many reports showing that employees who have just finished college are lacking interpersonal skills. I think negligence in building up those skills during college can be one of the causes. However, there are many solutions to this problem.
There can be many causes for this lack of interpersonal abilities. Firstly, this is due to the fact that many people, especially those who live in college are too focused on studying and do not pay enough attention to the importance of these skills. Because they do not understand how crucial these skills are, and in their work lives, they do not bother to acquire them. Secondly, the environment in colleges places little emphasis on developing extracurricular activities for students. There are very few organizations for students to participate in and build up on their teamwork abilities.
However, I think there are many ways that we can improve this situation. Firstly, schools should have more clubs and events for students to take part in so they have the chance to expand their network. By this way, students can foster and strengthen their interpersonal skills. Moreover, students should be encouraged to find internships during the summer or other vacations. This will help them understand the reality of work life and thus, know where to improve themselves to work effectively.
In conclusion, there are many reasons why young adults are lacking their transferable skills. One of the main causes is that people do not pay enough attention to building these skills. However, I believe that a lot of effort can be taken to solve this.
- Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment 73
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Most agree that schools should be training children to recycle waste to preserve the Earth s natural resources However some believe that it is parents who should teach their children to recycle waste while others feel schools are more responsible Discuss 67
- Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money making attractions aimed at tourists Others say this is the only way to save such traditions Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- International tourism is the biggest industry in the world Unfortunately international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10606060606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77231326599 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8848668445 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170950902598 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596850572216 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421731498191 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111920950101 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302992774008 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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