These Day , it is believed that children should not spend a lot of time on using smartphones . Although this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that children abuse their cellphones .
On the one hand , i am convinced that children should own a smartphone and use it for some purpose . Firstly , Mobile phones have important functions for the development of children.Student can easily search information and knowledge when have a trouble about homework , therefore they could receive assistance which can help them achieve many good results . Secondly , Parents can comfortably keep in touch with their children . The safeness of children often be a nervousness of parents when they away form us, therefore the connection among us is extremely important. Additionally , the communication between parents and teachers of children would control student which make them be better .
On the other hand , it is understandable why the smartphones addiction have to be stopped.
On top of that , cellphones take so much time of children . Smartphones have many types of leisure which make children could focus on it all day . For examples : games or platforms of socialmedia which own many attraction to young people . Children easily forget their learning and nervousness about their exercise.Futhermore , many diverse categories of leisure on smartphones make children happy without relationships , therefore they don not need make friends so smartphones reduce social communication of young people . Finally , cellphones cause many diseases about eyes such as blindness , low vision which reduce the quality of life of patient. At present , i am suffering low vision after five years use smartphones.
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support children should not spend a lot of time on their smartphones , i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
These Day , it is believed that children should not spend a lot of time on using smartphones . Although this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that children abuse their cellphones .
On the one hand , i am convinced that children should own a smartphone and use it for some purpose . Firstly , Mobile phones have important functions for the development of children , for student can easily search information and knowledge when have a trouble about homework , therefore they could receive assistance which can help them achieve many good results . Secondly , Parents can comfortably keep in touch with their children . On working-time , The safeness of children often be a nervousness of parents because they away form us, so the connection among us is extremely important. Additionally , the communication between parents and teachers of children would control student which make them be better .
On the other hand , it is understandable why the smartphones addiction have to be stopped.
On top of that , cellphones take so much time of children . Smartphones have many types of leisure which make children could focus on it all day . For examples : games or platforms of socialmedia which own many attraction to young people . Children easily forget their learning and nervousness about their exercise.Futhermore , many diverse categories of leisure on smartphones make children happy without relationships , therefore they don not need make friends so smartphones reduce social communication of young people . Finally , cellphones cause many diseases about eyes such as blindness , low vision which reduce the quality of life of patient. At present , i am suffering low vision due to five years of using smartphones.
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support children should not spend a lot of time on their smartphones , i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 73
- The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary Yen from 1953 to 1983 and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period 79
- The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 61
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finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 7.85571142285 331% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3272.0 1615.20841683 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 608.0 315.596192385 193% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38157894737 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10965786814 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.277960526316 0.561755894193 49% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 981.0 506.74238477 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5637092216 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.066666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76666666667 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 81.0 5.01903807615 1614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219845137327 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790265181625 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642887559973 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146068320869 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701016191187 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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