Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message is more comfortable .
• On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spend time writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take a lot of time of people . When spoken communication is abused , people do not have time to work or study. For example, if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are saved and everyone can watch them everytime. Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to receive from my relations.
• On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually lazy when using written communication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have to use keyboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , after I finishing my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at coffee shop to write message. Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the relationship between me and my friends is more close .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meeting, i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024 67
- Some people believe that children are given too much free time They feel that this time should be used to do more school work How do you think children should spend their free time 67
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77319587629 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81001646673 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529209621993 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7481962663 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168382102299 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719018248316 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691245230098 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896077791105 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537827198224 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.