Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis, and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Having a vehicle free day is on trend now in many cities, people are advised not to use private vehicles and instead are encouraged to travel in public transport. In my contention, this has a lot of advantages and it outweighs the disadvantages. This essay will discuss the advantages of public transport on vehicle-free days.
Firstly, air pollution and noise pollution is the contribution of the increased number of vehicles on the road. People rely on public transport has declined drastically due to poor maintenance. For example, It is evident that in major cities pollution level are higher than the normal because of the number of vehicles on the road. Moreover, the death toll on roads are increasing due to this so, a full ban on public transport will help people to realize the importance of using public transport to commute.
Secondly, using public transport will save money and natural resources also. For instance, if we travel on a public bus the ticket price will be comparatively low than the petrol price though this, at the same time, currency, as well as fuel, can be saved. Hence, by encouraging people to commute by common transport will prove beneficial in the long run. To embark on, why people are relying on the private vehicle? The answer is because of its convenience and comfort. If the authorities launch buses and train which can be used by all type of people it will improve the number of people using it besides, the frequency and coverage also matter.
To conclude, public awareness is the ultimate aim of the private ban and this will force people to use the alternate available, hence, will realize the importance of using fewer vehicles on road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...or example, It is evident that in major cities pollution level are higher than the nor...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t will save money and natural resources also. For instance, if we travel on a public...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70748971418 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2345460077 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277153229274 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105604842879 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891502538075 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188487274314 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745253727261 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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