Commuting from one place to another has become common nowadays. People mainly use two kinds of transportation like cars and bicycles.
As the technology is getting advanced nowadays, driving cars has become common in most of the cities like surat, mumbai and so on.
Driving cars also suites one's personality and makes them look more modern. The rate of branded car companies like jaguar, mercedes,audi,
etc. had been continuosly increasing since last two years. In fact, to make a country looks most richest then it would be depicted by the
level of their standard cars. In some cities, if some people do not have cars then that person will be looked down by the others. They thinks
that if they ride bikes then they will gain low standards. While there are some benefits of driving cars like one can reach their destination
on time due to the fast speed Technology installed in cars. The major benefit is of the safety, the seat belts are provided in every cars and
in the newest technology there is one small window type door on the roof of the car so that a person can get out of the car in case of
emergency incidents.
In the contrary, Some people in the least cities prefer to ride bicycles rather than cars. Bicycles are comparatively good than Driving cars.
There are plenty of reasons for this. The huge problem of traffic can be declined by using bikes. Recently, due to the Russia-ukrain war,
government had increased the prices of petrol and diesel, so using bicycles in situations like these can help to save more money. The CNG
driven vehicles are getting risk of letting fire so bikes can also save one's life. Using bikes can also reduce accidents that are occuring
in most of the cities. Many people of South indian states like Kerela, Tamil nadu and many other had been using these strategies since
years. The Best example of using Bicycle is that they do not cause any pollution. One can tell this by seeing the beauty of nature in Sorth
Indian states.
In Compedium, with the respect to everything discussed above. I retierate my opinion that even though bikes have some better benefits
compared to cars. But the safety, comfort, fast paced commuting and environmental friendly rides through electric cars is worth using.
- Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university to travel or gain work experience Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time 59
- In many countries the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse What causes this problem What measure can be taken to solve it 84
- Nowadays some countries are spending a lot of money to make it easier to use bicycle why is this so Is it the best solution to transport problem 71
- In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles while in other cities riding bikes are replacing cars Why is this the case Which development do you think is better 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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...richest then it would be depicted by the level of their standard cars. In some ci...
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...ikes then they will gain low standards. While there are some benefits of driving cars...
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...person can get out of the car in case of emergency incidents. In the contrary,...
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...n though bikes have some better benefits compared to cars. But the safety, comfor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84102564103 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.400493046 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546153846154 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6176569751 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256141642086 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065270170094 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560398318215 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775247577383 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052608474181 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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