Some countries are experiencing a dramatic drop in birthrates, whilst in other countries the population is rapidly increasing. What do you think are the causes of this? Do you believe this is a positive or negative trend?
There are reasons for this trend regarding women’s role in families. High birthrates in some countries are linked to cultural norms which often require women to have family and give birth at an early age. In India, for example, young women are considered getting married and having children as their main responsibility even though many of them do not want to. On the other hand, other countries witness a low birth rate because women in these countries tend to delay their role of giving birth. Since these women are often more educated compared to less-developed countries, many aspire to pursue and further their career paths rather than be confined to their traditional role – being a stay at home mom; therefore, many choose to wait until 30 or even 40 to become mothers.
In my opinion, this trend can result in problems for both developed and underdeveloped countries. Countries with high birthrates often have a higher number of poor people. In many underprivileged families, having more children means that parents have to take away their working time to take care of family members, which lessens their income and makes them hardly able to escape poverty. Meanwhile, a lower birth rate can lead to a significant workforce reduction in the near future. Japan, for example, is facing the issue of having labour shortage in agriculture and manufacturing sectors, which somehow affect the development of its economy.
- Some countries are experiencing a dramatic drop in birthrates, whilst in other countries the population is rapidly increasing. What do you think are the causes of this? Do you believe this is a positive or negative trend? 56
- Some countries are experiencing a dramatic drop in birthrates, whilst in other countries the population is rapidly increasing. What do you think are the causes of this? Do you believe this is a positive or negative trend? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10638297872 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71439333749 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6824536852 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100180469006 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467570354498 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434307611311 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772508605036 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300058236534 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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