Some countries are providing general education in secondary schools while others are teaching skills specific to a future career. Which type of education would be a better choice these days in your opinion?
In this competitive society, the education systems still remain a high controversy for many students and the secondary education system is the debatable issue. some schools aim to educate their students from a wide range of subject while other schools focus on only particular field related subject for students future career. this essay describes my own opinion and explains some reasonable arguments.
First and foremost, general education giving to students a sound knowledge of the society and it enables a student to have a common overview of the world which help to broaden their horizons with international education. secondly studying the general education with a wide range of subjects brings long term success, for example as soon as when the student graduated from secondary school they would have the option to select what kind of subject to study for high school or if not straight to choose a diploma level courses. Many students have the desire to enter to the best university in the country or studying overseas so finally, they can achieve their targets.
On the flip side, teaching one related subject to improve one specific skill is the other educational system which is really common in many developing countries. Many children nowadays will not have a proper education in school because of poverty and traditional reasons. However, learning particular Carrere also provides them with future career preparation. Many private and government educational institutes are providing these type of opportunities for students to learn a suitable skill related subjects to prepare for the job market. Commonly, many trade qualifications are issued from those institute with high knowledge of skill will important to students to find a valuable job in the local or international.
In conclusion, Although, general education in secondary schools is the best system to encourage and important to the student in long term, teaching a specific skill to a student enhance the chance of a future career in a short time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77845670715 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521604938272 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3425604472 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302784158432 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114996818805 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637184421291 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201218941996 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461416549286 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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