In some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Because of the development of biomedical science, there is a growing tendency in some countries that some fresh couples tend to have children late in their life. From my perspective, this phenomenon associate both with women’s growing career ambition and the increasing cost of life.
More and more women have delay their plan of wedding or birthing nowadays, and this is cause by their longer and better education. Women who gain high-level education start to reconsider their role in marriage. To be specific, they attach more attention to their career and trying to be professional in their field, instead of performing the role of mother in a family in traditional custom. Moreover, in some big city, many youngsters complain for the high cost of living and it causes them scaring of having baby since they have less money to bring up child. Actually, not only can feeding a family be a burdensome for young couples, but offering high quality education for their offspring could also be a daunting task.
Obviously, women can fulfill their career ambitions by having late child-bearing. And it also allow young couples to build a solid financial support for their child in the future. However, late child-bearing may give elderly parturient women pregnancy problems, and some even deadly. Also, the baby may have higher risk of having genetic disorder. Furthermore, if more and more women delay birthing, people might have to live in a society with the problem of ageing population. And it ending up with more pressure on feeding the elderly for future generations.
In conclusion, although young couples have better preparation for parents work and financial support, the risk for individuals and society should not be ignored. The analysis seems to indicate that it has more demerits for society and country than its merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
... having late child-bearing. And it also allow young couples to build a solid financia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71868227885 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8640746527 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168981194194 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666670140577 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603568349658 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115895793364 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604482758568 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.