In recent years, overweight and poor health have been becoming increasingly alarming in several nations. The issue is so serious that people worldwide cannot turn a deal ear to it anymore. Both the root of the situation and the way to deal with it will be shed a light in the following essay.
Admitedly, the crucial reason for rising average weight and falling health and fitness is fast food that has too much fat content. So delicious and convenient is fast food that it has been more and more prevalent for busy people or those who do not have a passion for cooking. Furthermore, it can be seen clearly that obesity and illness are attributed to not playing sports and doing the exercise. Because the amount of calories added exceeds the amount of calories burned, they become too fat that harms for their health.
To cope with the problem, countless measures have been applied, among which the chief one is that a reasonable portion or going on a diet instead of fast food. In addition, they should remember :"An apple a day keeps doctor away". Another approach is spending more time on going out or playing sports at least an hour per day to keep fit and have a healthy life.
The matter of gaining weight and unhealthy boby has aroused people's concerns. There are not the best and the only two solutions we can take. Nevertherless, it should be noted that we have to take strong actions to eliminate its negative effects and in a long term, this worry may be altered more positively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, as to, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69811320755 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45876205802 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4823139981 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133545055035 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432585059066 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281390456821 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071181123004 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271427625269 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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