In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do yuou think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Health is most important factor in every people life.The total progress of the nation depends on the healthy society.Nowadays ,In morden era,life style is change and food is also change. The problem of the increase weight is normally.We discuss the causes of the problem and also suggest some solutions.
The major consern of the overweight is the more eating fastfood and drinking sugary beverages.Fast food not contain suficiant portion of the protine and nutritions.However it cause more diposition of fat in our body. It is create the problem of hartdieses and blood pressure. The main reason of the hart atteck is the over weight. During more sitting habbit in office time.It also create fat which is major reason of gain the weeight. Over weight is reason of many dieses such as,blood pressure, hart atteck and asthma. Fat body can also impect on out personality and create some prolblem in daily life.
Overcome the problem, there are many good habbit.Firstly eating a healthy food which contain sufficient portion of carbohydrates, protins, vitamines and calories. Secondaly, you should include the exrcise and yoga in your daily lifestyle. Morning exrcise is more help to body in fit shape and also create musuls building. You must drink a hot water rather than cold water. However is the helps to burn fat and reduce chance of a weight gain. Thirdly, homemade food is more important then the street food While the home made food contain less oil , it affect less on the body.
To sum up,I pen down to says that the home made healthy food and exrcise are sufficient to prevent the overwewight. Adding to, fitness and energatic level of your body also increase to live long and stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, third, thirdly, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97202797203 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65483734395 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5495367861 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999207237685 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036894815049 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488037562046 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706687659161 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431173727595 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.