In some countries children have strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules?
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that children are one of the most crusial members that decide a future of the country. So, guiding children to the right path will ensure the country's development and society's goodwill. Some countries concur that if we allow juvenile to do that they want which will found fruitful results; whilst, some nations forcing children to follow some rules which hinder the children's development.
Adequate evidences are obtainable to substantiate the concept of allowing children to do that they like. The top-notch concrete reason is that providing freedom and allowing them to do almost anything they want may divert them into some creative phase. Another rational reason which hauls me to patron is they will never hesitate while they try something new in the future. Here I would like to cite an instance of US and UK where they give complete freedom to their childs. As a result, children can become fully developed as well as independent.
On the other hand, several countries in the world has strict rules of behavior for children. In those countries children spent their childhood mostly in following orders but they will learn how to respect adult, be responsible and many more lessons. Conversely, strict rules stop children's development and they will not show their inner strength and talents. For example, in india many regions not allowing their children to talk with opposite gender and that's why they not become socially active. Moreover, in the future they may be hesitate to communicate with others.
All in All, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting children's development while we allow them to do that they like. However, some contrary can be overlooked. Consequently, I firmly agree that we should not put burden of rules on children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12751677852 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61752710262 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2793578234 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468916014432 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15692335998 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887345018447 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281487776126 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392398039589 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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