In the modern world, the strict rule should be followed or not by the children is a critical and controversial issue. As children from different places of the world raised in different culture their behaviors are also different. For example in Bangladesh, more social and loyalty could be observed among children and they respect their parents in a very charming way. While respect is very common friendly relationships between parents and children are not. On the contrary, in European countries, children have more free will and they do what they like to do. They have priority on their own motto than their parents. However, they have a friendly relationship with their parents. So strict rules would not be suitable for all geographic locations, which might be helpful in some parts of the world. Raising children in strict rules has some advantages and some drawbacks as well which are discussed in the essay below.
First of all children under strict rules and code and conduct will be responsible to parents, elder persons and to this society. For them, society becomes more stable and attractive. The children in this society feel himself a responsible citizen and society gets a lot from him. The society of such children is free of heinous crimes and drug abuse. On the other hand, children who don't follow strict rules become rude and undisciplined. When they turn into a teenager they started to commit social crimes. They create hurdles in society and for them, the government has to develop laws to demolish and remove these bad elements of society.
In another aspect, raising children in excessive strict rules might lead them into psychological and social problems. It is not unsual that parents who bit their children frequently would be hated and not respected in later stage. Strict rules hinders the creativty of children.and make them under developed mentally. A friendly relationship among children and parents often help children for a better future generation. Strict rules are temporarry but love and friendliness are forever.
To conclude, children under strict rule have a good moral character and responsibility but exccesive rules and regulation could have negetive impact. So I would opine that some friendly relationship, some freedom and as well as some rigid rulee should be combined to nurture children and for their betterment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17922077922 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67467398467 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.292540519 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6956521739 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7391304348 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379939550444 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119600354526 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585381812056 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249389865779 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634352071857 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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