The age gap between two different generations create many issues. It is observed in some countries that the maturity difference between progenators and children is far less than nowadays. This essay intends to show the flaws of this phenomena are more than its advantages
To begin with, every parent wants to provide good education, as well as basic necessities to their little toddler. Therefore many people are not capable to afford this Load in early age,However mature parents can give this golden opportunity to their little ones. Furthermore, they can give advice to their child through their experience and also encourage them to be in discipline
Apart from the benefit, expressed above the age gap creates conflicts due to dissimilarity of thoughts. They both have different views regarding lifestyle and career. For instance, with aged people like the conventional lifestyle.They are not interested to enjoy trips with their children they want young wants to come with them for pilgrimage. In addition, young generation cannot express themselves to their parents and it is difficult for guardians also to understand their feeling
To conclude, undoubtedly mature parents can provide good lifestyles to their children as well as pay basic easily, However to live a prosperous and peaceful life mutual understanding and cooperation between guardians and young young ones is obligatory
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Mr.Strange
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40825688073 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86820523955 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.726814348 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.375 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163232198821 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872579493762 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727585112461 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111572537361 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887137832025 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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