In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel
less safe than ever before.
What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to
solve it?
In most of the countries, although the proportion of majors crimes are declining, men and women does not feel protective than ever before. The main problem is that they still thinking of those crimes which already occur in their place and unable to remove from their minds. For this, the most viables solution is a public awareness campaign about those crimes which have been omitted from their areas.
The principal problem associated with those people who does not feel that they are safer than before that is unforgetable crimes which stucks in their minds. That means, whenever they go outside from their home then they become more restricted and in their thought process is still same regarding those crimes which happend in the past in their own nation. Due to fearness, they always be aware to that area as they think this crime can happen again. The result of this is person mentality becomes unstable and many times they start feeling more self conscious. For example, The Hindustan Times conducted a survey in Bangladesh and asked to 50 people that they are more safer than before in terms of crime. About 72% concluded that the crime might be happen at anytime that they all have some fear.
To tackle this problem the government should launch a program awarness related to their security and ensure that their own people anxiety towards the crime should be erased from their mind. In order to get better protection from crimes then government need to tight more security so that they can win the trust of their own people. If the security programs estabish in their place then the people would feel more safer. An awareness campaign could shed light on this difficult situation and allow people to be more open and live freey without any fearness from crimes. For example, a similar intiatve in Netherland resulted in a 61% increase in people feel more safer than before.
In conclusion, people still feel less safer in some nation from crimes because of fearness and make in a mind that it could happen again. This problem can be solved if government start addressing the security power regarding crimes becomes strong than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...their own nation. Due to fearness, they always be aware to that area as they think this c...
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Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...sh and asked to 50 people that they are more safer than before in terms of crime. About 72...
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Line 9, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... can win the trust of their own people. If the security programs estabish in their...
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Line 9, column 409, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
... their place then the people would feel more safer. An awareness campaign could shed light...
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Line 9, column 658, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...sulted in a 61% increase in people feel more safer than before. In conclusion, people...
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Line 13, column 34, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less safe'?
Suggestion: less safe
.... In conclusion, people still feel less safer in some nation from crimes because of f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90163934426 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21645164343 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489071038251 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6815803863 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177129785197 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767299290067 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404681702647 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136667799986 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310069591682 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.