In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
High financial rewards for only a group of people continue to become controversial just as limiting amount itself has become a controversial topic in some respects.
On the one hand, it is often said that if there was no opportunity to give high salary for everyone, it would be better to pay a little part of workforce high fee is insofar as it was being able. In addition, some people feel that in terms of motivating workers to obtain the better jobs the possibility of being such kind of position may well benefit to the country. After all, in contemporary fabric of economy it worth implying that everyone has specific ability which is appropriate the adequate salary. Finally, there are question marks over the wholesomeness of controlling by government on earned money if we assume the corruption scandals that relevant to the tenor of government.
On the other hand, though, today it is acceptable that the aim of government is not only to create the atmosphere which everyone should have a chance to fulfill his or her interest, but also to check what weather is moral or not. Furthermore, the supporters of limitation claim that to maintain the balance amid the people who are under poverty and for whom is available to reach of targets. Finally, many people feel that equality regarding currency is the most substantial stuff to avoid the riots. It is notable, for example, inequality caused terribly civil wars throughout the history of our world.
Overall, I feel that high salary is good and should be applied, because human beings as a complex creature have a specific feature that without encouragement they cannot improve themselves and by this way is society. So as far as I concerned, the best way to find solution is to form positions for citizens who can receive high financial rewards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, well, after all, for example, i feel, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95439739414 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82765800995 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612377850163 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.377805554 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.272727273 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249093271007 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750123793868 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466359722718 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134091550032 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380740162424 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.