In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.
In many countries there is a huge income disparity among people. This is because some people are earning astronomical salaries. At the same time, there are many people who are struggling to make both ends meet. Some people, therefore, argue that the government should cap salaries. I do not agree with this view. In my opinion, this difference in salary is good for economy because it encourages people work harder.
If there is a limit to what people can earn, most of them will lose the motivation to work harder. The reason that encourages people work harder and harder is the yearning to earn higher salaries. Therefore, if the government caps the salaries, it will hurt the morale of employees. Also , having a small number of people who earn too much is not necessarily a bad thing. They act as an inspiration for the poor. These super wealthy people can also start enterprises that create jobs and improve the living standards of the poor people.
Of course, income disparity is not a good thing. It makes the poor feel inadequate. But at the same time, it encourages many of them to work harder and earn more. As human beings, we have a natural tendency to want more. We get inspired by the affluent lifestyle of the rich people and want to be like them. This human desire to improve their living standards is the factor that drives all economies. The government can certainly do something to lessen the disparity. For example, it can impose higher taxes for rich people. It can also launch welfare schemes for the poor. By offering free education and health care facilities for the people living below the poverty line, the government can put them in a position to work and earn.
To conclude, capping salaries is the solution for income disparity. Instead, the government should empower the poor people and help them earn a good salaries by offering them free education and training.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78658536585 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50595690929 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490853658537 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8125774734 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4166666667 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.79166666667 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341547386084 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970760563457 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832564536246 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233244990551 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531273713482 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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