The development of any country mostly depends upon the industrialization of different industries into the cities. It makes the growth of the country by providing employment to the citizens. But In recent years, the latest trends come up in some countries that government giving encouragement to the businesses to built industries in the regional areas rather than into the city area. I firmly believe that moving out to the regional areas for producing different products out of the city have major adavantages which outweigh the disadvantages simountaneously.
The disadvantages of setting up industries in the regional areas are firstly, it make long distance travel between the delievery of products and buying products from the city. It affects the cost of product and cycle of production by being inconsistent, depends upon the timing of reaching people conveniently. However, business face difficulty in making of profit generation and in technological advancements which takes a lot of new parameters to develop in regional areas.
In this instance, There are some advantanges also included in adopting the regional areas for manufacturing and industralization. The chemicals and gaseous products produce harmful gases in the environment and it impact over the health of people, if it is produced in the regional areas then it is consumed by the forest trees and convert it into fresh air to protect the environment. In addition, industries located in regional areas mainly consume electricity and water for producing products which can directly supply through dams and rivers with ease of access. Another one, it can be cost effective when expenses are reduced by using available resources with effectiveness. Labours also available at cheaper rates in regional areas.
Therefore, with these i argued that the government are pointing the decision of moving industries into regional areas based on the adavantages provided to the consumer and producer both parties with maximum benefits and it is also taken for protecting the environment, which consistently outweighs the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49382716049 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14367874462 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7997980368 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.923076923 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273854185833 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931983142286 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791258364655 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166226173124 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768854520008 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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