In some countries, A high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has happened? What can be done to deal with this?
These days, young people are taking a lead of criminal acts. This essay will discuss why teenagers are turning over to crime and will also suggest solutions to this obstacle which society is coping with.
The first cause is connected with the family. It is crucial that they are nurtured well by their parents. However, these days, it is often the case that children are neglected. This may be because of the fact that many parents in urban areas now both have to work so are often not around to give their children support when needed. Another factor is the increasing rates of poverty all over the world. Globalization remains reason for the rich getting rich and poor getting poor, and this inevitably means that those who are poorer will have to resort to illegal things to obtain what others have. Certainly, this includes the children in poorer families.
Conversely, there are ways to tackle such problems. Initially, one of the ways to combat the problem is that government should collaborate with family, schools, communities, and other related parties. Strengthening and enhancing the family in its main responsibility to form children’s moral and character and also controlling their activities in neighborhood.
To sum up, several factors have led to rise in youth crime but measures are available to tackle this obstacle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...hat children are neglected. This may be because of the fact that many parents in urban areas now both ha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...outh crime but measures are available to tackle this obstacle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, may, so, then, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11312217195 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66573064249 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651583710407 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0729645133 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9230769231 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114876476636 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337425859055 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327999614114 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639654631643 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407322880386 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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