some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is a positive or negative trend?
In this globalized world, trade has flourished and many countries import and export their product. It is said that some countries import a large amount of food from other countries. In the following essay, I would argue that this might be a positive trend.
To commence with, there are a plethora of reasons behind this notion. The predominant reason is that in case of natural disasters or any emergency, the import system can be beneficial for the countries. In these types of cases, countries can give help each other and can give numerous lives to the people. In this way, the country can show love and affection to each other and can have or take help in any difficult situation. With this thing, the bonds
between the two countries can become stronger. Moreover, while importing food to the countries, one country can have a great reputation in the world and there can be development in the country. Hence, these are the reasons that countries should import food from other countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84705882353 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51431885567 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3079039037 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284352064516 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133591397798 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139011208599 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235610454192 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136147151694 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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