In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Occurrence of Medical ailments in people is on rise and junk food is considered a main cause behind this happening/phenomenon, as a result it is thought that administration must levy great tax on street food. I agree and consider that above measure is vital to bring a decline in the consumption of fast food and essay below will unfold the reasons to support my stand.
The true purpose of eating any type of food lies in gaining nutrition to nurture the body, however the trend of consuming fast food frequently has become a reason for causing health issues because street food is great at pleasing test buds but offers no or very less nutrition value. Besides this excessive usage of spices surges unnecessary acidic reflux and upsets bile formation in stomach, which consequently leads the development of numerous syndrome related to liver function. For an example working people and adults, who avoid having homemade food and replacing their meals with street food often get succumbed to diseases such as obesity and high blood pressure.
Therefore required steps should be implemented by government and increment in tax seems feasible.
The another reason holds more value, since it is tough to bar manufactures from producing mouth watering junk food, which appeal fast food lovers, it can be a precise move to raise the bar of tax. Consequently there is strong possibility that masses will shift their likeness from fast food to healthy food, which is comparatively economical. For instance prevailing availability of street food has caused a stir among people for its consumption and above all it is too economical.
To conclude it is one the responsibilities of administration to take care of public health and fast food has emerged as one of the prime causes, behind rising medical issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08724832215 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89165963058 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9363119149 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.6 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293535776416 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112343899431 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411071640092 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14621929989 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519297101813 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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