In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore neccesary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extant do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
In some nations an increasing number of individuals are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much junk food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on fast food. I partly agree with this statement.
To embark upon, first of all, people are eating too much oily food due to this they face problems regarding obesity. Not only obesity but they also face problems regarding skin. Impose a tax on fast food by government is better way to reduce the consumption of junk food. Secondly, government should provides the awareness campaigns for people regarding the health. Because of this they aware about their health and eat healty food.
However, despite of the above arguments there are various reasons why i think government should not impose a higher tax on junk food. Firstly, if government impose a tax on fast food, layman cannot afford it according to their budget. To add on, sometimes dwellers do not have a time for cooking food they can easily purchase it from near shops without wasting time.
In conclusion, to reduce the obesity government should take actions. Awareness campaigns should provided by the government. Owing to this not only parents are aware about it but also childrens are aware about health. However, government should not impose a higher tax on fast food because laymen cannot afford it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
... junk food. Secondly, government should provides the awareness campaigns for people rega...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...arguments there are various reasons why i think government should not impose a hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98253275109 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51361540977 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524017467249 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5537310269 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0666666667 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462957281784 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161571018179 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118365222345 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325115944728 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189656980476 0.056905535591 333% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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