In some countries it can be very difficult for the people who are over fifty to get good jobs ,despite their experiences.
What do you think are the causes of these problems,what major could be taken for these problems ?
Most of the countries government give more priority for young generation to obtain a better job,there have more enough experiences old people to do best in those sectors.
To recapitulate, in my perspective I believe that old people who has sufficient skills should give chance to prove themselves. There are some possible causes of these problems like over aged, huge salary and so on .
Firstly ,people who are over fifty they are busy with their family business and that's why they can not supply properly and they can not come to their job place in right time .Furthermore, aged people are physically unfit .Most of the time they become sick and last their job ,though that situated is very risky for the company. Another thing must say that experienced people always wants huge salary for that owners give more opportunity for the fresher .On the other hand,fresher will work with a low scaled salary and the benefited with that .For example ,last month ,i saw a news portal ,there were written a news like they need 50 fresher in IT sector with 25000 thousands salary and also added that over fourth also can be applied but not allowed for high salary .They will provide same salary like fresher .
However ,some possible solution should be taken like experienced worker can teach fresher to improve skill ,from that both of them will be benefited .Besides ,we should change our outlook .Some experienced worker badly needed for some crucial sectors and it is very well decision to take them seriously.
Overall, though fresher is needed and experienced people also need in many sectors .We should provide them opportunity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, another thing, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98909090909 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39889998989 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.398580163 49.4020404114 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.0 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2857142857 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5714285714 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248270699175 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109524015414 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551798993141 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119217358791 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542382142599 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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