In some countries it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age it has postive or negtive development
In this 21st century everyone has right or work without any restriction but it is notice that in some countries companies are rejecting people for their age so so i am thinking it has more negative effects than positive
to begin with,there are many reasons why its negtive consequences firstly,there are number of youngsters who have wish to do work at companies but companies reject the people because of their age but in these days youngsters has more ideas to increase the company productivity which helps to company development .it is right to say that youngster do not have experience but their mental ability and physical ability has big as compare to older people For example,In china there has no any age restriction for work and most of the companies hyer youngsters due to this country economy has risen suddenly secondly some time some people have creative ideas and they have much knowledge about work but companies don't give opportunity to show their talwnt
however some jobs need a particular age like mines it need experience as well as special training because silly mistake can create big problem along with this, some jobs need a experience people if companies employers are not hardworking then they have to face many problems.
In conclusion I would say age is just a number companies can check a person ability by test or by interview
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93506493506 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66680721505 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 115.0 20.2975951904 567% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 574.5 49.4020404114 1163% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 570.0 106.682146367 534% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 115.5 20.7667163134 556% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 64.0 7.06120827912 906% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325293698765 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199760011647 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124364231237 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177347803607 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809750263807 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 59.6 13.0946893788 455% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -45.25 50.2224549098 -90% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 48.1 11.3001002004 426% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.28 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 48.0 10.1190380762 474% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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