In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
People’s opinion differs as to whether or not living alone is the better choice nowadays than in the past. While there are some strong arguments in favor of that ideas, I still believe that multiple generations should choose to live together for maintaining strong family relationships.
There are several reasons why living alone actually become popular nowadays. Firstly, young generation seemly want to be more independent when choosing separately from their family. They may decide doing whatever they want, coming home late at night or having more private relationships without getting troubles with their parents. Secondly, this may be an effective method to evaluate the ability of personal financial management. Without the support from parents, young people who has independent life can learn how to organize their finances sensibly and this will be an important key contributing to the success of their later life when they get married.
However, living together in family is the best way to strengthen family relationship. Nowadays, with the development of digital era, members of the family can easily keep in touch just by a click. But this is just the ideal condition, the fact actually that people are busier nowadays and the time they spend on to keep in touch with the family is less. By living together in a family, family relationships can be built through daily activities such as chatting at mealtimes, watching TV together and so forth. Therefore, family connections are built day by day using not only world but also daily activities together.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, my own view is that living together makes a contribution to closer connection between family members.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-01-21 | mostafa jahangiri | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
People's opinion differs as to whether or not living alone is the better choice nowad...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taining strong family relationships. There are several reasons why living alo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29710144928 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76046061865 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7022672122 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180541611127 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654697313423 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621809931491 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106529818994 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724941096784 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.