In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
The increase in the number of single-person households can be seen as positive from many perspectives. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone can enjoy the peace and quiet. For example, people don't have to worry if someone has the TV or music too loud, they just need to sit in their apartment and enjoy the peace and quiet. Second, since people have total control of their life and their apartment, they can live how they want whether it be hoarding everything, or being a neat people. Final, people will learn how to deal with life’s biggest problems by themselves. For example, living alone teaches them who they are after they leave everyone else, they will learn to be introspective and really listen to what they want and need. Soon, they will be able to trust their instincts better and develop a better sense of self-trust.
However, the issue can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, people who are easy to feel a little bored with their daily routine. For example, people who live alone feel bored most of the time and to overcome boring situation they need to spend most of their time with friends and family so that they can get rid of boredom in their life. Secondly, the most common disadvantage of living alone would be the feel being alone. Finally, when a person decides to stay alone and live alone, they might lose all the contacts with their family and friends. For instance, in midnight, when they fall ill, there will not anybody around to help them.
In conclusion, living alone has many advantages, but it also has disadvantages. It can get lonely and boring, but you will learn how to cope with that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he peace and quiet. For example, people dont have to worry if someone has the TV or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73556231003 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41600615941 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0957479613 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6470588235 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16854291121 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644153839614 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048870621097 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126510009627 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412250176424 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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