In some countries, many more people are chossing to live alone nowadays than in the peast. Positive or negative development?
In recent decades, people, especially the young generation, tend to choose to live alone by isolating themselves from their families for several reasons. Although this tendency will bring various benefits, I believe this trend has more negative consequences than the few positive outcomes it offers.
On the one hand, the rise in one-person households can help people get into an independent lifestyle. The first reason is that people choosing to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those living with their relatives or friends. They earn their own living without the support of families; for instance, they need to learn how to deal with a work-life balance, cook, and manage their financial budget, which may be valuable life skills and help people be more mature. Furthermore, the trend toward living alone will create freedom and an inner pace of designing her own private life.
This may benefit people who can create their rules and make their decisions without being distracted by other people's opinions.
It seems to me that the trend of increasing single-person families has many drawbacks, such as mental health and economic arguments. Firstly, without support from families, people find it hard to share their stories and receive helpful advice that assists them in overcoming the financial crisis from their close. For example, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents, which makes a living-alone person face rising living costs. Nevertheless, humans are social animals, so they always want to be surrounded by people from the beginning. They may suffer from psychological problems such as homesickness, loneliness, and isolation.
To conclude, many want to live alone and have their individual choice. However, I believe humans should together have alleviated the consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun want seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wants'.
Suggestion: many wants
...neliness, and isolation. To conclude, many want to live alone and have their individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35273972603 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7273930461 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3665371418 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205573096336 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716484825468 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589814848795 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11374139654 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394211070609 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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