in some countries many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past do you think this is a positive or negative development
The table chart show the percentage of women and men road in particular town bicycle in 2011.
These days, in few countries more and more individuals prefer to leave alone as compared to the past. Personally, I feel the main reason for this are more privacy or economic benefits. I therefore feel this is a positive development. I will articulate it in my following paragraphs.
To commence with, the main reason behind this why mostly individuals are choosing to live alone now day rather than in the past? It is a more privacy or space. Due to the fact that, enjoying families person do not get more space or time for ourselves. In other words, individuals also prefer to want their own companies but it is impossible if they do not live in separate apartments. For instance, people concentrate better when they do work in proper peaceful environment. As a result, individuals get good result in their work or field.
Further, strengthening my view point, when person leave alone then it effect to the money. To precise more, all the burden of economic such as electronic bills, water bills and mails related expenses also decrease. Consequently, people do not face financial problems and never feel the financial burden on their shoulders. Apart from that this enough money they can use to buy other things.
To recapitulate, in my opinion it is good development during when individuals live lonely because it beneficial for their economic as well as privacy matters.
The provided table chart illustrates, the information about the percentage of men and women who related to different age brackets in particular town and road bicycle in 2011.
After analyzing, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of females who related to different age groups and road bicycles in town more as compared to males. Females of age group of 0 to 9 road bicycle 50 1.4% which was 1.1 % more rather than men. 10 to 17 and 18 to 39 age groups of women who wrote cycles on the road was 42.2% and 17.1% respectively.
By contrast, percentile of men who 42to59 age groups was 8.0 % which was low as compared to females. Above 60 males age brackets percentage was 13.2%.
Looking for an overall perspective, the highest percentage of female all age groups as compared to men who wrote bicycle in the town in given time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, i feel, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82677165354 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74786284714 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7038981956 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5909090909 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237945964234 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627083291181 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633789620251 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107270775414 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727407207544 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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