In some countries , married Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it and give your opinion couples plan to have a baby at a later age due to the demands of their professional career.
In this modern era, everyone is busy to earn their bread and butter. Globalization has had plenty of side effects as well as benefits on our life and work style. The tendency in married couples to avoid conception is one of them. This attitude seems to have more drawbacks than benefits.
There are manifold points to support my view. First and foremost, Today's life obliges both partner in a marriage to work and to advance in their careers to meet the financial requirements. To explain, working couples may not get adequate time to conceive and look after a baby and this indulge them to have their offspring. Thus, childcare is becoming expensive in today advanced world which also force some parents to work for a few years to plan for their future generation.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. conceiving a child during middle age is harmful to the women as their natural stamina and strength reduce with age. Consequently, having a baby at later age has enormous negative effect on the health of women. In addition the hormonal changes in women body also affects the growth of child in the womb and this may have adverse effects during the time of pregnancy. As a result, sometime its create conflicts between the couple and may result in breaking of the relationship. On the contrary others have conflicting views.
Numerous points to explain its benefits. Initially, it is observed that practical work experience is helpful to the intellectual growth of working women. To explain, conceive baby immediately after marriage shifts their entire focus to the baby which further affects their personal as well as professional growth. Hence, for betterment of their future and social growth is is lucrative to have a baby after a later age. What is more, couple can relish their life without baby as they have no restriction to take care of their child. Thence, having a baby with secure future plans plays phenomenal role in every couple life.
To recapitulate, although it is very important to give attention to the professional career and growth, but i still think that, married couple should also consider the troubles that might happen during at a later age and take a decision accordingly
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
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Verbs: 0.155717761557 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0900243309002 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043795620438 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0486618004866 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116788321168 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.021897810219 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65616139978 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0535279805353 0.0326793684256 164% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0827250608273 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014598540146 0.021408717616 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00973236009732 0.011925033212 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
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No of words: 373.0 316.048096192 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99195710456 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367292225201 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260053619303 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171581769437 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0938337801609 0.137316102897 68% => OK
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Unique words: 203.0 176.037074148 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544235924933 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 60.5500779872 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7619047619 20.7743622355 85% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 0.904761904762 0.814263465372 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
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Readability: 43.7672666922 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.60784313725 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0818328123524 0.102741220458 80% => OK
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Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.508740709809 0.534860350844 95% => OK
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Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834730521714 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278126437555 0.324371583561 86% => OK
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Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323630457993 0.228012699653 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332429720975 0.058150111329 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
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Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
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Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
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Rates: 68.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9