In some countries old age is highly valued, while in others youth is emphasized. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Nowadays, there has been a lot of controversy among people over giving weighting factor to the role of youngsters and old people in society. Some think that the elderly must have higher value whereas others believe today, due to many reasons, young generation is more beneficial. In my opinion, both of the above-mentioned generations are required to have a successful society. The reasons behind my approach are economic, family- related, and humanitarian.
Experience of elder people and high energy of youth are the integral parts of any successful systems. These two key factors have a direct link with each other, promoting the efficiency of any family, society, and profession. It is obvious that, either youth or elderly will face real problems in case of working solely. Therefore, it is ideal to employ both of the above valuable human powers in our projects to have an optimized system.
From the family view point, presence of the elderly enables us have a rigorous family base and deal with the life’s hardships easily. It is undeniable that they have priceless lessons to give to us freely. In addition, they teach us the definition of vital words in the life such as father, mother, love, compassion, and etc.
It should be noted that it is far from humanity and moral values to lessen old people effect in society. However, we have our current condition as a result of their efforts, hence it is our duty to acknowledge their works and employ them in our lives.
In conclusion, I think that we have an access to the two valuable resources; experienced old people and powerful youngsters. Employing these factors will bring us an integrated system in all aspects of our life, as well as moral satisfaction.
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- Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.Why do you think this happens?What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains? 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ch as father, mother, love, compassion, and etc. It should be noted that it is far fr...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... In conclusion, I think that we have an access to the two valuable resources; experien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97250859107 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74833321469 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7415117536 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0757388141769 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255578607123 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275857829039 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04033953213 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272892995873 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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