Nowadays, in many countries people are preffering to live in their own houses rather than in living in rented homes. This essay will discuss the reasons for this trend and will outline whether this is a positive or negative development.
Firstly, one of the main reasons for this trend is that, people do not need to worry about the landlords. When people live in their own houses they will need the permission of the landlord to make necessary changes to the house and also they will need to make sure that everything is in it's proper place. To be more precise, if anything happens to the rented house they will have to pay for the damage cause. The house owner will ask them to vacate the house in these cases. But if people live in their own houses they will not have worry about these issues. For example if a TV in a rented house is broken, people will have to pay for it immediately, but in their own houses this is not neccessary.
Secondly, I believe that this is a postive development. When people live in rented accommodation they will have to pay huge amount of money every month as rent, whereas, in owned accommodation this spending this reduce to a great extent. For example, a survey conducted in 2018 found out that, majority of people prefer to live in their own homes due to the low costs. Moreover, people can use this money for other purposes, such as, for the education of children and also for hospital needs.
In conclusion, landlord issues are the main reason compelling people to live in their own houses. I believe that, this is a positive development because the expense can be reduced to a great extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58843537415 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41805158822 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455782312925 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8825386517 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212144337095 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892779878819 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530930611359 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153810703344 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541058716707 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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