In some nations, possessing dwelling is esteemed much more indispensable than renting one. This is handy for people’ lives. But this is also a disadvantage for them.
First of all, abode is the most homely whereabout for to comeback after work. Since, it’s a place which hasn’t any principles. We can do everything as long as we like such as coming house at anytime, watching TV fortissimo, etc without fearing to disturb other people. By contrast, numerous boarding-houses have got some rules about time. For instance, the oweners don’t allow us to return there after 10 p.m or making clamour. Besides, we couldn’t ornament its if we liked. By doing so, owning a domicile is supremer than leasting one.
Secondly, owning a house is straightforward to perceive utility of private abode. As we won’t worry about hidden cameras. Moreover, we aren’t under financial pressure like money for renting lodging-houses every month. Nonetheless, it’s also has some downsides. For example, when we go to firm or travel abroad, we always agonize about my house being drawn graffiti and we mustn’t cost money to repaint it. Futhermore, trading house is the most problematic issue. If we wanted to buy it, we would look for prestige and reliable companies to purchase one. Besides, money to buy its is a headache problem. It may be nothing to affluent people. But it is a big issue to impoverished people. They must hard- working or pay by instalments to possess one.
In conclusion, I think a house is crucial for all people. These merits can be relished by high-status individuals while other people feel its hard.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: TO_COMEBACK[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to come back'?
Suggestion: to come back
...abode is the most homely whereabout for to comeback after work. Since, it’s a place which h...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... whereabout for to comeback after work. Since, it’s a place which hasn’t any principl...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es about time. For instance, the oweners don’t allow us to return there after 10 ...
^^
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
..., the oweners don’t allow us to return there after 10 p.m or making clamour. Besides, we c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... clamour. Besides, we couldn’t ornament its if we liked. By doing so, owning a domi...
^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d to perceive utility of private abode. As we won’t worry about hidden cameras. Mo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02222222222 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87774679425 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662962962963 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8528843999 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.9565217391 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7391304348 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.47826086957 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168074622794 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509433954317 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491526067374 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128626059167 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644179518552 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.65 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: TO_COMEBACK[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to come back'?
Suggestion: to come back
...abode is the most homely whereabout for to comeback after work. Since, it’s a place which h...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... whereabout for to comeback after work. Since, it’s a place which hasn’t any principl...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es about time. For instance, the oweners don’t allow us to return there after 10 ...
^^
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
..., the oweners don’t allow us to return there after 10 p.m or making clamour. Besides, we c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... clamour. Besides, we couldn’t ornament its if we liked. By doing so, owning a domi...
^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d to perceive utility of private abode. As we won’t worry about hidden cameras. Mo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02222222222 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87774679425 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662962962963 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8528843999 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.9565217391 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7391304348 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.47826086957 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168074622794 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509433954317 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491526067374 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128626059167 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644179518552 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.65 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.