For many people, the will of owning a home is not possible or unfavourable. In many countries, the necessity of having your own house is crucial and better that renting one. This essay will justify why this is commonly believed and tell wheather it is a good or bad trend.
One main reason for preferring owned houses to rented ones is the convenience it provides. If you have your own apartment or home, then you are less likely to face anything which causes you moving out repeatedly. In addition, having your own property results in greater financial reward. For example, you will definitely not have to worry about paying monthly rent for the landlord, or even taking full resposibilty for fixing any damage caused in the house. This is why having your own independent home brings peace of mind to your life.
Personally, despite the merits this idea has, I still find it negative in many ways. Firstly, it is not always possible to own a house due to financial difficulties. In other words, not all people are capable of affording a house and fulfillung their basic daily needs at once, which will cause them trouble knowing that houses are pricey, especially if they own a not well paid job. Also, if you change jobs alot, you can easily move from the place you are living in and rent another one located in your work region, and that is a thing you can't do while owning a house.
In conclusion, owning a house might seem a wise choice, but still, it has a number of setbacks to take into consideration. Liking this trend or not certainly depends on your professional and financial situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66077738516 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53403458322 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2169973782 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283365410859 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100228170079 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448998304775 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173860664712 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505471933196 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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