I totally agree with this statement. Because house is one of the basic necessities for cos of living. Nowadays, most of residents prefer to live own house than a rental place to live. I will discuss about causes of it that it a positive way in this following essay.
To begin with, some people consider that the home is flawless place where the family have unforgettable moments with their relations. Thus, own houses of human are place where they can live during the lifetime do not need to change the place anymore. It is true that the house could value to upcoming generations and their children's lifetime. For example, my brother's house where they are living nowadays, it reminds of us the beautiful time that we spent together with our grandparents and ancestors. Thus, having own house is more comfortable for residents.
Other side of the coin, having own house instead of living rental is a positive way. Because for buying a house have some difficulties such as investing, going to bank more time and waiting a tough queue. It is usually seen that people are paying high payment for accommodation instead of living own house. As a consequence, residents have to change the place to another. For example,if you do not have city permission you would not purchase house from the city. In addition,in modern days the government give credit to people for cost of living to people. Afterwards they will pay back monthly.
To sum up,it is clear that the owning house is fundamental thing for humans' lifestyle. Therefore,in some countries' people prefer to buy own house rather than choose a rental house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... statement. Because house is one of the basic necessities for cos of living. Nowadays, most of re...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the residents') or simply say ''most residents''.
Suggestion: most of the residents; most residents
...ecessities for cos of living. Nowadays, most of residents prefer to live own house than a rental ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...urchase house from the city. In addition,in modern days the government give credit ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59997711369 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1265335658 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4444444444 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198671522338 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669996933799 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455308320596 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138983416701 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364979260449 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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