This is a fact that now a days majority of people prefer to buy used things instead of buying new stuff. While I believe that buying second hand appliances rather that new, has several positive impacts, it can leads some negatives for the society too. Now I am going to discuss both the positive and negative impacts.
On the one hand, At present the buyers keenly interested in buying pre- owned products and goods and occasionally go for new things. First of all, sometimes old things provides much more benefits than new ones as if they would buy the things that are already in use then then consumers think that it can be used for long time. However, many times it happens that when somebody buy new products that sometimes don’t work properly so they have to spend money for repairing and maintenance. As a result, people’s first priority is to buy second hand things which are long lasting, Secondly, from the point of view of cost, in case of new products they have to allocate large amount of money that is a big expenditure but they can buy used things in almost half prices. Therefore, in these days people purchase second hand things. Finally, secondary products promotes recycling process in the society that is really important in order to reduce wastage in the society. Moreover, this is not only cost effective but also makes the society a better place to live.
On the other hand, as per my point of view along with positives the trend also has some potential negative impacts. Firstly, techno advancements are taking place day by day in fact, these are incredibly important to survive in the fast paced world. So, people should buy new and innovative things as much as possible to be modern being that in today’s world innovation plays an significant role in every field of life. Besides this, buying old things are less reliable and sometimes do not work efficiently likewise new ones. That is why, people should spend money on new products rather that spending monthly on repairing old ones. One of the most benefits of new products is that it provides large variety of goods that is absent in Second hand goods. Eventually, instead of buying damaged goods people should purchase innovative products so that they can take advantage of new features as well as used products are time consuming.
To conclude, although secondary goods has some positive impacts yet I think that it’s negative impacts surpasses its positive impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i think, in fact, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73396674584 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35832655084 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465558194774 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 421.0 20.2975951904 2074% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1993.0 106.682146367 1868% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 421.0 20.7667163134 2027% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 212.0 7.06120827912 3002% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39869261338 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.39869261338 0.084324248473 473% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262609475491 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119450582021 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 211.3 13.0946893788 1614% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -347.38 50.2224549098 -692% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 166.3 11.3001002004 1472% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.29 8.58950901804 318% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 170.4 10.1190380762 1684% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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