In some countries people are possible to have a wide variety of food have been transported all over the world. To what extent the benefits of this development out of the drawbacks.
It has been observed that denizens have a multitude about of eating options, since transportation of food has taken place around the whole world. Despite of an unnecessary merit, this evolvement paves the way of a number of demerits. Reasons behind my agruement are discussed and ensuing paragraphs.
To engender with, Consuming a foreign food is and embrassingly obsequious for individual health system. Before sending it in one country, the food might be stored in unsuitable weather conditions. Hence, that food have a huge chunk of virus and bacteria that are froze in food surface. Eventually it can affect hazardously on the people well-being. For example, people all over the world have been reeling with covid- 19 because of having an anlimited consumption of outside transported meals.
In addition massess should not be able to cut corners on their expenses, if they are addicted to eating foreign in food. In other words as people are taking an enormous amount of outside food, there will be a chances to loss money exceedingly because they are very expensive, plus it requires 0.5% more text to be paid. Ultimately a money should not be invested in a vast amount of foreign food.
However as the coin has both side, similarly in case of eating transported foreign meals there is a minor advantage. Although foreign made food have a debt remained result on human health and total savings, it has and inestimable taste which attracts many individuals to eat them. So they can fulfil necessities of the tongue and feel the emphaty while consuming food. For instance, people get a lot of pleasure out of eating a pizza which has been produced by Italy. Thus, sometimes it is essential to eat alien food in order to make our tongue satisfied.
In conclusion, denizen are keen on eating exotic food, as it has a splendid taste; however, this enlargement is not proved to be beneficial when it comes to maintain people well being and costs which I have mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'frozen'.
Suggestion: frozen
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...on of outside transported meals. In addition massess should not be able to cut corne...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a chance' or simply 'chances'?
Suggestion: a chance; chances
...s amount of outside food, there will be a chances to loss money exceedingly because they ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ed in a vast amount of foreign food. However as the coin has both side, similarly in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, similarly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93731343284 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70348569995 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591044776119 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4051806573 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241248590594 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739785473703 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717128359083 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13668599073 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066047306411 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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