Few country follow the tend of doing long time duty. Despite of having some positive site of it, i think, the bad side is far more.
Doing work for over time can creat lots of promlems in personal life. The emplyees of a inturance company in our locality, for instance, have to work more than ten to tweelve hours which make them exhausted. After going to home they do not bear this mood to give time to their family. As a result of this, their family feel bad about himself and he also not that much happy with them.
Furhtermore, working over time beyond one's capability can make himself less productive. If a stuff have this ability to work eight hours, but for pressure he have to do his job more than ten hours, he will be less productive in last hours. Consequently, the emplyeer will not get his desire outcome from him stuff.
One the other hand, If the tend of long duty turned into a habit, it might work later on both for emplyeer and the emplyees. A chef can be an example of this, he have to do his duty as given time, however, when there is a pressure of so much guest in the resturant, without any excuse he have to make more and more food. The consequence of this, the chef gain experience along with some extra money, and the resturant also get money and fame.
In conclusion, in spite of having some chances of being wealthy and getting experience, the personal life should not be hamper for long time duty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Few country follow the tend of doing long time duty. Despite of hav...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ite of having some positive site of it, i think, the bad side is far more. Doi...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mlems in personal life. The emplyees of a inturance company in our locality, for ...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...weelve hours which make them exhausted. After going to home they do not bear this moo...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...o work eight hours, but for pressure he have to do his job more than ten hours, he w...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...om him stuff. One the other hand, If the tend of long duty turned into a habit, it mi...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s. A chef can be an example of this, he have to do his duty as given time, however, ...
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Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...in the resturant, without any excuse he have to make more and more food. The consequ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40601503759 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22779810637 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5990257486 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132582246144 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520905960933 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259857447639 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835417541864 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293559800163 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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