In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison.
Do you agree or disagree?
some countries nowadays are taking a different approach to punish criminals. these countries made a person go through community service programs that commit a less serious crime. Although the government takes this as a positive step many people argue that all the criminals should be sent to prison for a time according to their crime. This essay will discuss how making a person go through community service is a good thing for a nation.
it is believed to be unfair by some people that all the crimes are not treated equally before the law and it raises questions on the integrity of court and law. it would also encourage and create a sort of leniency towards a crime. for example, knowing the outcome of unlawful activity, a person may do it anyway knowing that he or she can get out of it anyway, they may also do it repeatedly without fearing the laws. Due to all these reasons many suggest that everyone should spend his/her time in jail no matter how serious is the crime.
However,I believe that undertaking a community service is beneficial for everyone.it will help the government in providing facilities to less unfortunate while maintaining the financial condition of families stable and which will prove itself to be a great benefit in the future, for instance, If the only earning member of a family is sent to jail it may result in a chaotic downfall for them, other members like school and college student might have to drop out of their education to earn and that may harm their future, by not damaging their education a country can ensure that youth of the country is safe and will contribute to its advancement in the future.
In conclusion, Lineant behavior to minor crime may sounds unfair to some people but in the long run, it will prove its worth to its nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71337579618 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52513029634 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544585987261 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.721573731 49.4020404114 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295939452849 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120215476172 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793442086626 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171916284974 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833187397017 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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