In some countries, students have to learn two or more languages at school.
Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, from students are being required two or more languages at school.In my opinion, there are some advantages such as, in business and student's knowledge .
Starting with advantages, these days some countries are teaching their students two or more languages, because recent tense requires them , because If people want to do business they have to know necessary languages and that can help when they are cooperating , as well as that can bring income for their business and it can change their economy of their country. Secondly a lot of school have start teaching more languages from first class, because some information are in different languages which is the most necessary dates , knowing languages can improve student's outlook and knowledge ,With it they can work foriegn country , especially they have a opportunities to study there .
Unfortunately, there are some disadvantages ,for example ,in the world have different culture ,they are not suitable for each other ,some countries are muslim they always wear long clothes ,but other not .
That can destroy student's behaviour and their thoughts,mostly girls because they tend to wear different clothes and they may want to dress like them this may be issue in some countries
In conclusion, even if there are benefits for business and education,they do not have to imitate their action otherwise students' moral may be violated
- In some countries students have to learn two or more languages at school Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 55
- In some countries students have to learn two or more languages at school Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 56
- In some countries students have to learn two or more languages at school Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 41
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31221719457 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77826557736 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0484853073 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 234.8 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.2 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.8 7.06120827912 380% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325330224873 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201024257201 0.084324248473 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874796901898 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182765609909 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101116082572 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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