In some countries university students live at home with their families while they study, whereas in other countries students attend University in another city. Do you think the benefits of living far away from home during the university outweigh the disadvantages?
living with families and study in the same city and live away from home and study in another city are depend on the situation. study away from home has its own advantages and disadvantages.
As of those, who think that study in another city far from family is an advantage, they feel this way because they get an environment of study. For instance, a research last year found that 50% of semi-urban students move to another place as they lack of the good environment for study and opportunity. In addition, they believe that in another city they may have an opportunity to communicate with students from various places. A fantastic example of this is, a boy from Odisha came to kolkata for higher study and learned bengali and became a bengali short story writer.
In contrast, other people hold the notion that living away family to study in another place is expensive. For example, the cost of living in mumbai is higher than kolkata. Moreover, sometimes students are not able to bear the cost and leave the study. More specifically, costing of MBA at mumbai including food, commute and other expenses was 25,000 rupees per month in 2015. Nowadays the room rent and the cost of living in mumbai on the increase, which cannot bear by a student. Apart from that, a student may face language barriers. For example, students from english speaking countries may face a language problem where english is not a language of communication.
The advantages of disadvantages of study away is depend on the city, country, course and lifestyle you choose.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85283018868 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61440541989 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524528301887 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7156531237 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276932367478 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973674131245 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497069531679 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156014345214 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540414867843 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.