In some nations, university students live at home with their families, whilst in others, collage students move to other cities to attend collage instead of staying with their family. Despite some obvious disadvanteages of this trend, i believe that there are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are a number of major drawbacks when university students live at home. The first drawbacks is the lack of guidance and family support. Students are sussceptible to emotional feelings of homesickness and loneliness at such a young age. These factors can lead to peer pressure and cause some pupils engage in antisocial behavious such as drinking, smoking, etc. Another negative effect is a lack of finance. The price of accomodation in big cities is unaffordable. Due to this fact, many students are tned to find a part-time job in order to pay their bills and make their ends meet. Consequently, these has a severe impact on their studies and may make them quit the collage.
On the other hand, i believe that the benefits are more significantly than such disadvantages. Firstly, living away from home can help student become more confident and independent. They get a lot of opportunities to face real issues and try to get through it, make their own desicions. Secondly, it’s a great way for students to learn basic skills such as money management and financial management, which are important qualities to have. My sister is a case in point. After few years living apart from home, she almost starts to be independent thinking and deal with her difficulty situations more effectively. Finally, students have more opportunities to widen their horizons, enrich their knowledge by living far away from home.
In conclusion, i would argue that living away from home brings more benefits than drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.127090301 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84767240948 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8021067567 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413506623294 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105371118836 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102818642979 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242904541859 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629542224684 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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