In some countries young people are encounter to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
It is obvious that graduating from a high school and starting a university is considered as a important stage by many people. However, some say that it can be rewarding experience traveling or working before starting a university for a year. In this essay, I will discuss about upsides and downsides of making such a decision.
There is no doubt that having such a break may bring some useful outcomes in terms of adolescent. Firstly, It can be beneficial in terms of health to stay away from courses and lectures for a while.This is because, It is considered by most people that doing monotonous tasks may damage our brain and lead to some disease such as cognitive disorder or depression in youth. In addition, It is a good opportunity for adolescents to acquiring working or traveling experience. It is certain that they can earn money to provide their university expenses if they decide to work or, they can widen their horizon if they choose to travel. Both of these option can be useful for them.
However, It can be some drawbacks of this decision. Firstly, one year for a break is too long. the reason is that they may not give sufficient attention for their courses when they start to university.In addition, If they decide to travel, they may encounter financial problems. They may also face some negativeness if they decide to work. This is because, many job vacancies require experienced stuff and employers are mostly looking for long-term workers.These are some disadvantages of this decision as well.
In conclusion, although having a break generally brings some advantages such as avoiding some diseases or getting experience or money, it may have some drawbacks such as lack of money or excessive time of break.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9385665529 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82631775992 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5973278866 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267746741207 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986513220525 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491527307805 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166376307519 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688028568177 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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